Friday, 4 March 2016

A Refusal to Mourn

Today's post features my last short story, one written around the beginning of 2015 during a period when I was feeling a bit down. I think it's one of my better short stories and, by publishing it here, I can enjoy the buzz of reaching an audience instantly. If (dear reader) you are interested in any other short stories I have written, several can be found on this blog - specifically, "69", "Starlight" and "Beside the Lake". As I said about these other stories, you are most welcome to apply my literary theory to this one if you want.
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                                           A Refusal to Mourn


In later phases of her life, after her marriage and the births of her two children, after the procurement of a second mortgage and the death of her parents, Xanthe would look back on that summer as the summer that she put her childhood definitively behind her. For a summer, she disengaged herself from ordinary reality and hung suspended between two worlds; for a summer the wheel of time stopped turning. The spring before had been the catalyst. Her parents had been fighting again, an interval of backbiting and bitching that would end conclusively in divorce at last; she had become disillusioned with the art school in Auckland where she was majoring in printmaking; all of her close friends had moved out of the city. Xanthe decided that she needed a break from her usual routines and made up her mind that she would go to Raglan for some indefinite duration. There she could live out of her van in the car park, sit every night on the beach with her guitar and permit her blonde dreadlocks to grow out. It had seemed like a vision of paradise. Xanthe was just a little more than nineteen years old.
The first day she arrived late, around eight. When she was settled, she cooked a dinner of baked beans and bread fried in canola oil on her primus stove and ate it on the beach sitting on her sleeping bag and watching the scarlet drain out of the Western sky above the crashing swells. The next day she went into the town to make arrangements for her stay. She approached the local backpackers and asked if she could use their laundry every week or so to wash her clothes. She went to the petrol station and found out the cost of a bag of ice – her plan was to keep her food in a chilly bin and replenish the ice every couple of days. She familiarized herself with the location of the supermarket. She visited the library and borrowed Monkey Grip by Helen Garner and The Naked Lunch by William Burroughs. That evening she sat on the beach and played Joan Baez and Bob Dylan.
Sometimes it seemed to Xanthe that she all she had ever done her whole life was listen to other people talk – her parents endlessly exchanging barbed and sarcastic comments, her teachers droning on monotonously about history and biology and math, her friends with their chatter about parties and drugs and relationships and boys. For the first time in her life, Xanthe found herself surrounded, not quite by silence, but by an ambience that bordered on silence - the continuous wash of breakers falling, the unintelligible din of distant conversations, the occasional plangent cry of a gull. Sitting in the evening on her sleeping bag with her book and her thoughts, she wondered if Buddhist monks felt this way in their monasteries when they sat cross-legged and meditated on samsara and karma and suffering. That night, when she crawled into her sleeping bag in her van to sleep, she found that she had not shaken out all the grains of sand that had crept into it but, although she expected the itch to bother her and keep her awake, an unconsciousness nearly as complete as annihilation overtook her almost instantly.
A couple of days after she first arrived, Xanthe, while drifting purposelessly along the main street of the town, saw a ‘help wanted’ sign in the window of a local café. She opened the door, crossed over to the counter of the café and enquired of the manager serving about the job. The manager, harried by the mid-morning rush, briskly told Xanthe to come back at five thirty, closing time. Xanthe crossed over to the library and filled in the afternoon waiting for the interview by skimming through New Scientist magazines and googling music blogs on the Internet. When she returned to the café the manager, who was also the owner, flipped the sign hanging on the door to ‘closed’ and they sat down opposite each other at one of the tables in the quiet of the now empty dining room to discuss the job. The last kitchen hand had abruptly resigned to resume his travels hitchhiking around the country and Felicity needed someone to clean the dishes and generally help out out back. Felicity wore a long turquoise dress and dangling bone earrings; she reminded Xanthe of her godmother Gloria, a woman with gypsy tendencies who supplemented her regular income by telling fortunes with tarot cards and selling gemstones at local fairs, and consequently Xanthe liked Felicity immediately.
“I can’t afford to pay you much,” said Felicity. “And, if it’s not an problem for you, I’d prefer to pay you under the table.”
“That’s alright,” said Xanthe laughing. “If  you pay me under the table, then it won’t interfere with my benefit.”
Xanthe started work at the cafe the next morning. Felicity employed her six days a week. Xanthe began at seven and stayed until two, washing dishes and occasionally assisting in the cooking duties of the chef, an Australian Aboriginal with a wry, deadpan sense of humour who had come to New Zealand to escape the endemic racism of his home country. In quieter moments, he would entertain her by telling her stories about the Rainbow Serpent and the Dreamtime and by performing pitch-perfect whistling impersonations of Australian birdlife. Not only did Xanthe like the chef, she found that her first impressions had been correct and that she got on with Felicity like a house on fire. When Felicity found out about Xanthe’s living arrangements she offered to put Xanthe up at her house and, when Xanthe turned down this offer, Felicity compromised by inviting Xanthe around for dinner a couple of times a week. There Xanthe met Felicity’s husband Russel, who was absent-minded and bandy legged and who worked for the post office and as a part-time volunteer for the local Fire Brigade. After dinner, Felicity and Xanthe would retire to the gazebo where Felicity would sit smoking menthol cigarettes, drinking brandy-and-cokes and telling Xanthe, to Xanthe’s embarrassed amusement, long stories about the string of unsuccessful boyfriends she’d dated prior to meeting Russel.
“Make the most of your youth,” Felicity would tell Xanthe after she had put away a few drinks. “It’s the best time of your life. You never know what’s going to happen to you as you get older.”
Ten years later, Felicity would suffer a major embolism while driving to Hamilton and die on the side of the road.
Every afternoon, Xanthe would sit on her sleeping bag on a dune, reading or watching the other beachgoers. Because it was summer, and because the weather was fine, the beach was often crowded with people – backpackers from Europe, families on their summer holidays, locals wandering along with their dogs on leashes, and, of course, surfers. It was the summer of 2012 and 2013 and the sea was generous that year. The surfers fought for territory among the waves. When one caught a good swell, he would leap to his feet and hold a graceful, balanced posture, arms outstretched, for at the most thirty seconds before being caught and dumped by the breaking of the wave. A little down from and to the right of Xanthe, a group of young surfers had claimed a piece of the beach as their own, and, when they weren’t in the water chasing the best breakers, they sprawled together in a circle drinking, smoking, casually hassling each other and presumably chatting about sport and music or whatever boys talked about when they were together. Occasionally one would dart an inquisitive glance at the girl who sat every afternoon and evening by herself on a sleeping bag on a dune reading. After a couple of days, one of them decided to assuage his curiosity by approaching her and, having apprised his mates of his intention, wandered up the beach towards her.
            “Why are you here by yourself?” he asked. “Don’t you have any mates?”
            “I didn’t bring any with me,” said Xanthe. “I didn’t want them to spoil my vacation.”
            “So is anti-sociability a cast-iron policy of yours? Or do you want to come down and have a beer with us? What do you think?”
            “I suppose I could break my sobriety for a bit,” laughed Xanthe.
            “Cool,” said the boy. “I’m Mark, so you know.”
            Xanthe followed Mark down the beach and the boys made room for her. Mark yanked a bottle of brown ale from the chilly bin, opened it with his lighter and handed it to her. The three boys, all about twenty, were wearing loose board shorts and were possessed of the tanned, athletic bodies of young men who spent a lot of time in the sun and at the gym. Mark, in particular, had a form that tapered from wide muscular shoulders down to narrow sexy hips ­– Xanthe wondered to herself if he had some Maori blood in him. He was swarthier than other two. Sitting cross-legged next to him, Xanthe felt both self-conscious and preternaturally aware of his physical presence beside her. When he lifted his beer to take a swallow, he revealed that, on his arm, he had, not a Maori design as she might have guessed, but a tattoo of a snake that coiled around his bicep and bit its own tail – it made Xanthe think of the Rainbow Serpent and then the Midgard Serpent from Norse mythology. She asked him if the tattoo had any significance for him.
            “Not particularly,” said Mark. “I just got it because I thought it looked cool. I only got it a couple of months ago.”
            “Did it hurt?”
            “Shit yeah. But I’ve wanted one like it for ages.”
            The other two boys were called Alex and Michael. All three had attended school together in Hamilton but Michael had abandoned Hamilton for Dunedin to study geography. The summer was the only time during the year when they could all get together. The three of them, together with Alex’s girlfriend Michelle who had chosen not to come to the beach that day, were staying in a holiday home that belonged to Alex’s parents, surfing while the sun shone and partying at night. In recompense, Xanthe told them a little about her own situation, explaining to them that she was working as a kitchen hand in the township, living out of her van for the foreseeable future, and had no idea what she was going to do with herself the next year. Mark was very attentive, leaning close with questions and showing genuine interest in her answers. It turned out that Mark himself was studying Media Studies but that his real passion was the electric guitar. He had just recently started a garage band with a couple of mates; they hadn’t done a gig yet but they were working on it; they were still developing a repertoire.  While he was speaking, Xanthe lifted her knee to her chin and clasped her ankle, displaying her leg in an unconscious gesture of flirtation, realized that she was doing it and immediately tucked in her leg again. The gesture must not have gone entirely unnoticed by the others though and provoked an odd reaction. An electric current passed between the Alex and Michael. They leapt to their feet and stood facing each other.
            “Why don’t you tell the chick how much you can bench-press, bro?” asked
Alex.
            “Why don’t you go fuck yourself, bro?” replied Michael. Xanthe burst into laughter.
            “Fuck this shit. I’m going for a swim,” exclaimed Michael, sprinting off towards the water.
            “Do you want to have a swim?” Mark asked Xanthe, leaning towards her – not lightly, but with the same earnest, confidential tone he had adopted earlier. It was as though they were the only two on the beach.
            “Sure,” said Xanthe. “Just let me go get changed.”
            Xanthe set off up the beach toward the car park across the blazingly hot sand. As she walked, occasionally she giggled to herself – boys of a certain age were all such retards. It must be something to do with hormones. Back at the van, she climbed in through the rear door, drew shut the mesh curtains that hung over the windows and quickly stripped off her denim shorts and yellow blouse. Her red bikini top was hanging over the steering wheel and the bikini bottoms were under the mattress for some reason. As she put on the top, she caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror she kept in the van. Bodies, she thought to herself with amused self-disgust, who needs them?
            Alex had brought a rugby ball with him and when Xanthe arrived back at the sea’s edge she found the three boys up to their waists in the water lobbing the ball between them. “Here I am!” Xanthe called out to them and plunged into the ocean. The water, as it always does on first contact, felt bracingly cold, especially, as she got deeper in and it reached first the level of her cunt and then her belly button, but Xanthe knew that once she got over the first shock she would soon become accustomed to the chill. Mark threw her the ball and she caught it in both hands.
            “We’re playing a kind of game,” he told her. “Do you want to be involved?”
            The game was a version of Piggy-in-the-Middle. They four of them divided into two teams: team-mates would throw the ball between them and the opposing two would attempt to intercept it. Mark and Xanthe were on one team and Alex and Michael were on the other. Xanthe wasn’t very good at this game but she enjoyed watching the boys throwing themselves around, stretching supplely when they chucked the ball or diving dramatically to catch it before it hit the water. They seemed supremely unaware of their physical fitness and grace. Occasionally, a swell would roll in from the side, lifting Xanthe off her feet and then, when it passed, allowing her to settle again on the sea-floor. The time by then was a little past six and the afternoon was swiftly dwindling. After about half an hour, the four of them regathered on the beach and the boys pulled on cotton t-shirts.
            “You know what we should do?” said Michael suddenly. “We should come back here tonight after dark and build a bonfire.”
            “How can we do that?” asked Alex. “Where would we get the wood?”
            “We can buy a sack of firewood from the service station,” pronounced Mark with an air of decision. ”And a bottle of lighter fluid. I built a bonfire with my folks that way in the Coromandel one year.”
            Michael and Alex immediately and enthusiastically endorsed the plan and it was swiftly decided that they should head off into town to stock up on necessary supplies right away, although Alex inserted a diffident request that they travel via home-base in order for him to collect Michelle. Mark turned to Xanthe.
            “So what do you think? Do you want to party on the beach with us tonight?”
            “Sure,” laughed Xanthe. “It’s not like I’m doing anything else.”
            After Xanthe had picked up her woollen jersey from the van, the four of them piled into Michael’s car and they set off towards the bach where the boys were staying. They drove with the windows down so that the boys could smoke. On the way, Michael regaled them with stories about surfing in the icy-cold waters around Dunedin and the weird wetsuited dudes with grey pony tails he had met down there. The stories he told were often very funny and Xanthe laughed a lot, although her laughter was more the result of the edginess a person can feel when finding herself suddenly in a car with three strange surfer dudes from Hamilton than a reaction to the stories she was hearing. It was a situation she simply couldn’t have predicted.
The bach, when they arrived at it, turned out to be less a bach than a stucco cube. Alex went in the front door and emerged, a couple of minutes later, with Michelle, a petite zaftig strawberry-blonde wearing red jeans and white singlet and knuckling her eyes.
            “I was asleep,” Michelle said plaintively as they walked back down the path towards the car. “Why’d you have to wake me up?”
            “I told you – we’re going to get drunk on the beach tonight.”
            “But I was asleep.” Michelle stopped abruptly, looking towards the car. “Who’s the hot chick in the back seat?”
            “Just some random girl we picked up on the beach. She’s called Xanthe, I think. Mark’s got a major hard-on for her.”
            “Just so long as she doesn’t oust me from my position of sexiest bitch in Raglan,” Michelle declared.
             Michelle and Alex climbed in the car and the five of them set off towards town, Alex and Michael sitting in the front seats and Xanthe and Mark sitting in the back with Michelle in between them. Mark continued plying Xanthe with questions about her life and interests, speaking past Michelle as though Michelle wasn’t there. Xanthe could tell that he was hitting on her, that he was into her, and it gave her a feeling of keen delight to parry his enquiries and to play with him.
            “What do your parents do?” he asked.
            “My dad lectures in Economics at the university but he reads a lot of poetry in his free time. His favourite poet is Dylan Thomas.”
            Mark had no idea how to reply to this.
            “I like your hair. Is it natural?”
            “I’m actually a brunette. I’m planning to let the dreads grow out over the summer.”
            “Does anyone else smell burning?” Michelle piped up. “I smell burning.”
            Alex, who was sitting shotgun, swivelled around to look at her.
            “Michelle – your hair is on fire.”
            Michelle squealed. They pulled over to the side of the road while Michelle anxiously patted out the small smouldering in her locks. An ember must have blown back from one the boys’ cigarettes and lodged there. After everyone was reassured that no real damage had been done, Michelle burst into a gale of relieved giggles.
            “It’s because I’m so hot,” she said. “I’m so hot that sometimes I just spontaneously combust!”
            “It’s like an auto-da-fe,” said Xanthe smiling wryly.
            In twenty years time, Michelle would have put on thirty kilograms, be unhappily married to the assistant manager of an office supplies shop in Huntly and be childless as a consequence of endometriosis.
            After they had purchased wood, lighter fluid and a box of beer, the group decided to kill some time by going to a local pub for dinner. They ate their meals in the beer garden and then hung out for a while, drinking, smoking and talking shit. For the first time since Xanthe had met him, Mark opened up a little about his own life. He did, in fact, have some Maori blood in him. His tribe was Ngati Maniatpoto and he’d spent time on the Marae when he was young, although he hadn’t been back in a long time. Looking around, Xanthe noticed, with a little misgiving, that everyone was drinking, including Michael the driver, but felt, uncharacteristically for her, too shy to say anything about it. It had also occurred to her that there might be some local bylaw prohibiting fires on the beach but, when she decided to mention this, the others reacted indifferently.
            “Time to go,” Mark announced suddenly. “We need to get this party properly started.”
            They drove back to beach. By this hour, the sun had almost completely set: the sky was painted deep red and the undersides of the scattered cumulus clouds were burnished gold. Once they had found a suitable spot, they built a ziggurat of wood, doused it in lighter fluid and set it alight. It had become dark by now. Flames were soon stretching into the air, feet planted in the wood and hands waving and petitioning the empty heavens. Michael hooked up his iPod to a set of speakers and put on a play-list by the Beatles. Beers were handed round and drunk. Marshmallows, that they had had the foresight to buy when they were in town, were skewered on sticks and roasted. After a little while Xanthe was enjoined to go get her guitar from her van and lend it to Mark. Michael turned off the iPod and Mark played Bob Marley and Pearl Jam to the group, taking evident pleasure in being the centre of attention. Watching him, Xanthe privately concluded that she was probably the better guitar player but judged this an observation best keep to herself.
            At one point, when the conversation lagged, Xanthe found her eyes drawn to the fire and to the clouds of sparks that rose from it. In the old days, back when she was a Christian, Xanthe had believed that a spark rising from a bonfire was a perfect symbol for the human soul – a point of light borne up out of a conflagration, twisting and turning, alone and yet in company, until it winked out of existence… but she guessed that now that she was a Buddhist, she would have to abandon her belief in souls. Buddhist didn’t believe that people had souls.
            “Have any of you guys heard of the Fire Sermon?” she asked without thinking.
            “Nope,” said Alex. “What’s that?”
            “It’s one of the central texts in Buddhism. It’s a speech that the Buddha delivered to a bunch of fire-worshipers about pain and desire and ignorance. Zorastrians, I think.”
            “Buddhism?” said Michael. He was sitting on the other side of the fire. “Those guys believe in reincarnation, right? What do you think Alex? Do you believe in reincarnation?”
            “No way, bro. That stuff’s bullshit. I think that when you die, that’s it, the end, finito. You only get to live once.”
            “What about Heaven? You don’t believe in Heaven?”
            “I think Heaven is something invented purely to reassure religious wackos.”
            In twenty years time, Alex would have a crippling stroke while cleaning the guttering of his house and, despite serious incapacities with respect to language and motor skills, would still manage to cling on to life for another thirty.
            After a little while, Mark came and sat next to Xanthe. She was a little drunk by this time. The salt from the afternoon’s swim had congealed on her skin and had started itching. They chatted intimately, Mark complimenting her on the beauty of her mouth and the blueness of her eyes. They kissed. Mark put his hand up Xanthe’s jersey and felt her breast. They kissed again. After a moment, Mark drew back, grinning broadly, and said, “I’m just going to go talk to the boys for a bit. I’ll be back.”
            Mark crossed to the other side of the fire and stood talking volubly to Michael and Alex. Xanthe gazed blankly across the fire at him. It was a problem. He was good-looking - there was no denying that - but there was something wrong about him. For one thing, he wasn’t as smart as she had hoped when she first met him. And his strategy of endlessly asking questions and never talking about himself had grown tired after a while. Unbidden, the memory of her favourite cousin Andy rose to the surface of her mind. It happened this way sometimes. She and Andy had been the same age. They had played together, gone roller skating together, gone to the zoo together, hung out and listened to music together when they were older. In a way, he had been her first love.
            Xanthe remembered the last time she had seen him. It was in hospital. He was lying in bed wearing a beanie because the chemotherapy had denuded him of hair and there were tubes coming out of his nose. Late stage aggressive leukaemia. For the first time in her life, Xanthe felt uncomfortable to be in the same room as Andy and wanted to get out of it as fast as possible. Nevertheless she made an effort to sit next to him, be brave and smile. Andy reached over and put his hand on hers. There were so many things I wanted to do, he told her. Live for me. I can’t do it for myself. Andy succumbed not long after. He was seventeen.
            The sparks spiralled up from the bonfire. Mark came strolling back around it towards her, the firelight casting a red sheen across the side of his face. It was as though he was on fire. In his eyes, he had a look disconcertingly like triumph.
            “We’re going to be going soon. Do you want to come back to our place with me tonight? What do you think?”
            The sparks soared up from the dying bonfire, twisting and turning, and at last vanishing into nothingness.

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